Lady Sydney

Vixeyt: Umm.... thanks for the help. Writersdomain: Much thanks!! I'll take your suggestions into consideration. ^^ :smt049 ~Syd

Thanks to all for your advice and suggestions.... and compliments. ^^ This was by far my most favorite one shot to write, so I'm glad you guys liked it so ...

Thanks for everything you've suggested and commented on, but this story won't continue any further. Sorry. I had this whole thing mapped out in my head, but now I just ...

Oh. Forgot to say thanks here again. hehe So yeah, thanks for your help, crit, comments, and suggestions!! Rather twisted but good and it's nice that you didn't go with ...

Hehe thanks. I had this posted on as well, and they said the same exact thing. (What Eric said, not JC) So glad to know and hear that!! ^^ I've ...

Thanks!! :D Nice to know I got the reactions I wanted from you guys. :wink: The point was to make the mother seem evil to Vyla, but sweet and motherly ...

*blushes* Thank you a bunch, Kel, it means a lot to hear you say that. ^^ Glad you loved it so much! *small bows* Gracias. :smt049 ~Syd

Thanks again, that was very helpful and appreciated. Gracias! :D I'll take it into consideration for when I write something like this again. :smt049~Syd

Thanks so much for the crits, guys! :D :smt049~Syd

Thanks everyone. Your crits were very helpful; be looking out for the next chapter. I'll probably just PM you when it's up though.... Thanks again. Bye! -Syd

Thanks, biancarayne!! I'll take that into consideration. *jots it down* :D

I agree with Jenna about the grammar and such. Watch out for those!! Other than that, I enjoyed it. I look forward to more!! ~Sydney